I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Manu I like the way you did the colour of your speech bubble and how it goes light to dark. I like the way you do your picture and the way you do some of your sentence. You need to make sure your sentences make sense and make sure to read it before you show it. From Lyeza
Hi Manu my name is Kloe from New brighton catholic school, I like the way changed the colours of your speech bubbles, Did you know that i used to play soccer, Next time, you could add more color, Do you do jobs at the farm?
Kia ora Manu - you are always such an active boy! I'm not surprised to see in your slide these are the things you enjoy!
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Hi Manu
ReplyDeleteI like the way you did the colour of your speech bubble and how it goes light to dark.
I like the way you do your picture and the way you do some of your sentence.
You need to make sure your sentences make sense and make sure to read it before you show it.
From Lyeza
Thank you for your comment, Lyeza
DeleteHi Manu my name is Kloe from New brighton catholic school,
ReplyDeleteI like the way changed the colours of your speech bubbles,
Did you know that i used to play soccer,
Next time, you could add more color,
Do you do jobs at the farm?
hi kloe we play hide and seek we also catch pigs itis really fun.
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